A new world chapter 1

I opened my eyes and found myself in a very odd place I looked and saw I had mud all over my paws then I saw a gray tabby tom with blind eyes staring at me.   "Um, who are you?" I asked.   "You tell me first." The tabby tom meowed.   "Um, my name is..." I meowed while looking at my fur I was a dark brown tabby.   "Dusk..." I meowed fast.   "Okay, Dusk i'm Jayfeather, ThunderClan's medicine cat." Jayfether meowed.   "What are you doing, Jayfeather?" A pale ginger she-cat meowed.   "This cat wants to join our Clan, Sandstorm." Jayfeather meowed.   "Very well. Lets take her back to camp." Sandstorm meowed.   

Next thing I know i'm standing in the leaders den Bramblestar staring at me.   "Are you a rouge?" Bramblestar asked me.   "No sir, I was a loner." I meowed.   "Very Well, you can join." Bramblestar meowed while standing and padding to the High-Ledge.    "All cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the High-Ledge for a Clan meeting." Bramblestar meowed.    All of the ThunderClan cats started to walk up to the high ledge when a yellow tabby tom stopped and looked straight at me.    "This cat has come to the Clans and wishes to join our Clan so we welcome Dusk as a apprentice of ThunderClan so until she earns her warrior name she will be known as Duskpaw."    The whole crowd cheered my new name.    "Her mentor will be Cinderheart." Bramblestar continued.    A gray she-cat padded up to me and we touched noses.    "SHADOWCLAN ATTACK!" A White tom with huge black paws hissed.